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*temporary chapter art as I have not drawn it yet! XD*

...What's this? I updated? ME? UPDATED? THE WORLD'S GONNA ENDDD!!!! *brick'd*

Aha. xD I can't believe I really typed this up! I want to give my little inspiration shout to :iconppeacht: who is uber awesome and pushed me to finishing another bit of this. <3 Also of course to my Z5 ladies for being awesome and having their fanfictions up for inspiration. <333 Thanks guys.

So here we get a glimpse at little Luma's personality, and her GLARINGLY awesome first impression that she makes on people. She's not like this always, usually only when she's a kid! She's a total brat! XD And Kraison, my dear Kraison. I love you sweetheart, but your mood swings irritate me to no end. Stick with one, mkay? Also, last names finally mentioned! Yaaayyyy! *brick'd*

Anyways, enjoy! Constructive criticism on the writing style would be greatly appreaciated! >w<

Part 2: [link]
Part 4: Coming soon!

Anything OC and Keeper related(Lumaiess and Kraison etc. etc.) c) Me
The Legend of Zelda c) Nintendo
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I...WANT...MOOOOORRRREEEEE!!!!!

 

Why you no work on this more? D: You have a nice way of writing Lu and I really want to see things progress.